Whether it’s a Web site, advertisement, or other marketing collateral, we’ve heard that a picture is worth a thousand words. Having a visual of the product enhances marketing communication, we’re told, because people don’t have time to read. I don’t doubt that people fail to read most of the advertising copy they come across, but that’s because of the hype that’s part of most ad copy, not people’s lack of time to read.
In a study of 3,600 consumers, researchers concluded that to get people to notice an ad, text was twice as important as pictures. Your clients are interested in reading about your services, but you must grab their attention. What’s new about your offering? What’s your story? Is there news?
What’s most important is that the fluff be ruthlessly eliminated from your ad copy, Web page or other marketing communication. If you include hype and half-truths, you make it nearly impossible for clients to separate the wheat from the chaff. The result: a lost sale. Ten different studies have shown that when the bull is stripped from ads, consumer interest skyrockets.
Of course, other studies have shown that long ad copy does work when selling products and services. When it comes to marketing consulting services, though, to improve your client’s rate of interest, make every word count. And remember that the “right” words, not just any words, are the ones that sell.